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[虛構]100%原創~愛情之旅!![Update t0 chapter .34(下)]

[b][size=2][color=royalblue]hihi...
大家好呀..

呢個故事開頭唔係愛情故事...不過慢慢就係嫁la
等我介紹下d人物先..


人物介紹:
陳零美(美):肥妹仔一名,鐘意呀健,F.4

袁榮健(健):幾靚仔嫁,數學成績一流,F.4

張智兒(兒):好靚女,有好多人追嫁(包括:呀賢,呀藍,Raymond等等),鐘意呀賢,but之後鐘意.......F.6

陳永賢(賢):鐘意呀兒,靚仔一名,成績一般,F.6

文晞娜(Ella):靚女一名,成績好差,文晞全妹,F.3

羅偉藍(藍):幾靚仔嫁,成績ok la!!鐘意呀兒,F.2

文晞全(Raymond):樣子一般,成績ok,鐘意呀兒,文晞娜哥,F.5

楊寶寶(Bobo):成績好好,鐘意呀坤,好憎文文,F.3

楊君(君):呀兒ge fans,鐘意呀希,幾靚女嫁,F.5

蔣玲(Ling):呀君ge[口靚],呀兒ge fans,鐘意呀峯,F.5

何倩文(文文):鐘意呀賢,樣子一般,F.3

高希(呀希):鐘意呀兒,好靚仔,F.4

石坤(坤):鐘意Bobo...ok靚仔,石峯哥,F.4

石峯(峯):鐘意文文...ok靚仔,石坤弟,F.4


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[size=3][color=magenta][b]屋苑下ge公園~
呢個公園係大家等大家ge地方
今日係9月1號,開學la!!返9點
但係佢地約左7點半一齊去食早餐呀!!
希同ella最早,佢地仲好恩愛添
so睇唔到兒,美,峯同坤黎左

兒,美,坤,峯:早晨
希,ella:早晨(好攰咁講)
兒:嘜你地兩夫妻咁早呀!
美:做咩呀你地??好似好攰咁喎
峯:係lo,琴晚搞咩黎呀??
希:冇呀!我琴晚打機打到2點呀
兒:吓!!2點?
希: (點頭)
兒:2點係人都訓左la
坤:咁ella呢??
ella:我琴晚睇書睇到2點呀!!
兒:又係2點!?你地今朝又唔訓多陣,仲咁早落黎!!
峯:咪係....

之後賢,藍同bobo到左~
賢:早晨呀,兒!!
兒:早晨呀,bobo!!早晨呀,藍!!
bobo:早晨呀..
藍:good morning
賢:1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9,仲有5個未到!(嬲嬲地咁講)
bobo:55
兒:你嬲呀??(同賢講)
賢:邊個話我嬲呀??(惡)
兒:冇嬲咪冇嬲lo...做咩咁惡喎!!
賢:對唔住lo..
兒:哼!!
希:你地唔好再嘈la!!
兒:係佢聊交嗌先嫁..你估我好想同佢嗌呀!!
藍:夠la!!佢地咁遲嫁,e+已經7點35分la!!
希:咪就係lo

佢地終於黎la,不過得3個咋(文文,呀ling同raymond)
兒:呀健同呀君咁耐都未到嫁!
賢:係lo
raymond:不如打比佢地la
希:佢地黎la
兒:係喎,咁姐係行得la,快d行la,我好肚餓呀
君:sorry呀...遲到!!
健:對唔住呀!!我訓過龍呀
文文:唔緊要..行la..好肚餓呀!!
ling:食咩呀!?
希:不如去發記食la!!
賢:good idea
兒:咁行la!!


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我e+寫緊ch.2 la
請你地等等

ch.2

[size=3][color=magenta][b]發記~

兒:系咪全部照舊呀?
All:系!
兒:發叔!唔該照舊14個呀!!(大聲)

發叔系發記ge老闆(簡稱發)~
萍姐系發叔ge老婆,好少去發記幫手

萍:好!冇問題..好快到
All:萍姐?
萍:系呀!?好驚訝呀!
All:系呀!!
兒:你平時好少落黎嫁!做咩今日咁好落黎幫手呀
萍:我老公病左呀!咁我呢個老婆系咪好應該落黎幫下手呢?
希:系!不過….(比萍姐cut左)
萍:不咩過呀!等等等好快有得食

D野話咁快就到la~

賢:兒!比隻蛋你呀!
兒:好呀..thank you
希:嘜你地咁快好返嫁?
兒:梗系la!我地系老友黎嫁嘛!
Raymond:兒!比隻蛋你呀
藍:兒!比隻蛋你呀(同raymond一齊講)
Raymond:做咩跟我講野呀?
藍:應該系我問你先岩呀
兒:夠la!嘈完未呀!!(惡)
峯:兒..你系得ge
Raymond,藍:sorry呀

Raymond同藍互相睥住對方~

兒:睥完未呀!(惡)食野la…系喎!你地頭先講咩話?
希:佢地話比隻蛋你喎!
兒:哦!
藍:咁你要唔要呀!
Raymond:系lo
兒:我2隻都唔要!
藍:咁你又要賢果隻?
兒:就系要左佢果隻,先唔要你果隻!!
Raymond:咁聽日要我地果隻lo
兒:冇可能!
Raymond:why?
兒:no why?
兒:賢呀!比塊火腿你呀!
賢:好呀…thank you!
Raymond:我又要!
藍:我又要!(同raymond一齊講)
兒:冇la…最後一塊比左賢呀!
藍:咁你碗入面果塊呢?
兒:我唔洗食呀(惡),系賢比左只蛋我,我咪比返塊火腿佢lo!
Raymond:咁點解你…..(比兒cut左)
兒:冇點解!!食野la(惡)

賢,Raymond同藍好快就食哂(8:15a.m)~

兒:你地食咁快做咩呀!
賢:我好肚餓呀!
兒:你食完野仲肚餓呀!
Raymond,藍:我地都肚餓呀!!
兒:傻嫁咩!我已經飽la(食左一半咋)
賢:咁快就飽,我幫你食埋佢呀!!
兒:好呀..唔該哂
Raymond,藍:我又要食!
兒:noway!你地叫一碗兩份食la
希:咁賢又…..(比賢cut左)
賢:我地拍緊拖呀!!你地唔知咩?
All(除兒同賢):吓!!
希:兒..系眞嫁??
兒:55!系眞嫁,好奇咩?
賢: 你拍得拖,我唔拍得咩….
Ella:得!!
兒:對唔住呀!!咁遲先話比大家聽
文文:幾時開始嫁??
兒:Er….
賢:暑假中lo!!
美:你地咁嫁…拍拖都唔話比我地知!!
賢:Sorry呀…(賢拖住兒)

8:30佢地食完野la!!希比錢….比完錢就返學校la!!
兒同賢&希同ella好開心咁拍住拖返學~
而藍同raymond就好down咁返學~
其他人有講有笑咁返學~


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ch.3

[size=3][color=royalblue][b]學校---操場~

賢:BB,好耐冇返過黎la(同兒講)
兒:係呀,bb(同賢講)
希:ella,放學之後我地去邊呀(同ella講)
ella:希希!不如我地去行街街lo..
兒:咦!你地去街街呀?
ella:係呀!一齊呀!!
賢:怕唔怕我地做你地ge電燈膽?
希:我怕我地做左你地ge電燈膽!
兒:點會姐!咁一齊la
ella:好呀!!
賢:咁我地去邊先?
兒:um....去邊好呀?
ella:不如去旺角呀!
希:好呀!有冇問題?
??:有呀!!
兒:邊條友係到答爹呀?
ella:咪係lo
??:係娟呀!
兒:娟??哦!娟(轉身)
賢:hi!娟!

娟係兒同賢ge朋友

兒:娟...好耐冇見la!!
娟:係呀!呢兩位係....(指住ella同希)
兒:佢係希(指住希)佢係希ge女友ella(指住ella)
ella,希:hi
希,ella,兒,賢:佢地係...(指住娟後面果2個男仔)
娟:唔記得同你地介紹添,呢個係我男友Tim(指住左邊果個),呢個係我細佬John,佢中一咋(指住右邊果個)
兒:咁Tim form幾呀!?
娟:佢F.6嫁,同我地一樣
Tim:我6B嫁
娟:你地放左學係咪去旺角?
ella:係呀!!
娟:我同Tim一齊去,得唔得呀?
希:得!冇問題la
賢:咁放學見la,有冇問題?
john:有..咁我去邊呀
娟:返屋企..
john:唔制呀
兒:咁你有冇女友呀?你有就一齊黎la
john:好...我就帶佢黎...一齊去
娟:你幾時開始拍拖嫁..你家姐我唔知喎
john:我唔係咩都話你知嫁
娟: ok..咁放學見la


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[size=3][color=darkorchid][b][font=Times New Roman]6a[/font][font=新細明體]課室[/font][font=Times New Roman]~[/font]
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[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]你估娟個細佬有冇女友呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]我覺得冇[/font][font=Times New Roman]lo[/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]我都覺呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]....[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]連你細佬都唔信[/font][font=Times New Roman]??[/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]好奇咩[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]唔奇[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]係喎[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]你地幾時拍拖嫁[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]吓[/font][font=Times New Roman]!![/font][font=新細明體]你又知我地拍拖[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=新細明體]我地都冇講[/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:Tim[/font][font=新細明體]講嫁[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]佢話佢見到你地頭先拖手[/font][/b][/color][/size][size=3][color=darkorchid][b][font=Times New Roman]..
[/font][font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]野[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]都話唔好嫁[/font][font=Times New Roman]la!([/font][font=新細明體]同賢講[/font][font=Times New Roman]&[/font][font=新細明體]打佢[/font][font=Times New Roman])[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]怕咩姐[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]我[/font][font=Times New Roman]E+[/font][font=新細明體]就同全班講我地拍拖[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]唔好[/font][font=Times New Roman]la[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]你怕[/font][font=Times New Roman]??[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]又唔係[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]咁我講嫁[/font][font=Times New Roman]la[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:55[/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]咁你地幾時開始嫁[/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]暑假中[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]大家[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]我有野宣佈呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]!([/font][font=新細明體]大聲同全班講[/font][font=Times New Roman])[/font]
[font=新細明體]同學[/font][font=Times New Roman]a:[/font][font=新細明體]咩呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]同學[/font][font=Times New Roman]b:[/font][font=新細明體]你要結婚呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]痴線[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]偉[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]定係你得到某某[/font][font=Times New Roman]ge[/font][font=新細明體]歡心呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
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[font=新細明體]偉係[/font][font=Times New Roman]6A ge[/font][font=新細明體]學生[/font][font=Times New Roman]~[/font]
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[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:bingo![/font][font=新細明體]你地估係邊個[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]偉[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]我估係娟[/font]
[font=新細明體]娟[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]痴線[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]我先唔要佢呀[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]錯[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]再估[/font][font=Times New Roman]..[/font]
[font=新細明體]同學[/font][font=Times New Roman]a:[/font][font=新細明體]我估係婷[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
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[font=新細明體]婷係[/font][font=Times New Roman]6A ge[/font][font=新細明體]學生[/font][font=Times New Roman]~[/font]
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[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]錯[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]再估[/font][font=Times New Roman]…[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]??:[/font][font=新細明體]係兒呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:bingo![/font][font=新細明體]係邊個估嫁[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]??:[/font][font=新細明體]係我[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]邊個[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font][font=新細明體]名呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]唔該[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]??:[/font][font=新細明體]係海呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]海[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]好勁呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
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[font=新細明體]海係[/font][font=Times New Roman]6A ge[/font][font=新細明體]學生[/font][font=Times New Roman]~[/font]
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[font=新細明體]海[/font][font=Times New Roman]:thank you[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]All:[/font][font=新細明體]哦[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font]
[font=新細明體]婷[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]原來係兒[/font][font=Times New Roman]([/font][font=新細明體]兒面紅[/font][font=Times New Roman])[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]話比你地聽呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]![/font][font=新細明體]唔好蝦我女友呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]!([/font][font=新細明體]大聲同全班講[/font][font=Times New Roman])[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]??:[/font][font=新細明體]邊個係你[/font][font=Times New Roman]ge[/font][font=新細明體]女友呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]邊個呀[/font][font=Times New Roman]?([/font][font=新細明體]望望[/font][font=Times New Roman])Miz chan![/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Miz chan[/font][font=新細明體]係[/font][font=Times New Roman]6A[/font][font=Times New Roman] ge[/font][font=新細明體]班主任[/font][font=Times New Roman]!([/font][font=新細明體]簡稱[/font][font=Times New Roman]chan)[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Chan:[/font][font=新細明體]早晨喎[/font]
[font=新細明體]賢[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=新細明體]早晨[/font][font=Times New Roman]..Miz chan[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Chan:[/font][font=新細明體]你仲未話比我知[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=新細明體]你女友係邊個[/font][font=Times New Roman]?[/font]
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[[i] 本帖最後由 sammi12 於 2008-10-16 08:02 PM 編輯 [/i]]

ch.5

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[b]話說chan問緊賢邊個係佢女友??

賢:咪係兒lo!
chan:邊個兒呀?
賢:兒呀!你個女呀
兒:閘住!我冇呀媽嫁...我呀媽死左好耐la,唔好再提佢....
chan:女...女...兒呀!!你呀媽係到呀!!
兒:miz chan,你耳仔有問題呀,都話我呀媽死左好耐la!!
賢:兒呀
兒:唔好叫我!(講完走左)
賢:兒...(賢追住兒)兒...(捉住左兒)
兒:放手la!!(fing開賢隻手)
賢:兒呀...打左鐘la(攬住兒)
兒:嗚.....(兒開始喊)
賢:傻瓜..唔好喊la,入去la
兒:55,但係你要應成我,唔好再提果個衰人!
賢:咩都聽哂你話la
兒:咁入去la,記住我講ge野呀(兒拖住賢一齊入去)

入到classroom~
兒,賢:miz chan!!
chan:兒!你出一出黎!!
兒:唔出得唔得呀??
chan:唔得..即刻出黎(惡)
兒:都話唔出lo(惡)
chan:一定要呀!
兒:出咪出lo(大聲講)
兒:賢,陪我出去(同賢講)
賢: ok

兒同賢一齊行出去,行到一半~
chan:賢,返埋位!(賢fing開兒隻手,想行返入去)
兒:唔淮返,你咁細膽做咩呀(賢拖返住兒)
Chan:返去(兒同賢一齊行返去)
Chan:stop!兒留低
兒:又係你叫人地返去,e+又唔比人返去,你嘜lun事呀?
Chan:你幾時學得咁壞,係咪佢教你嫁?(指住賢)
兒:唔關佢事嫁,係你離開我同老豆之後,我就係咁la,我細細個就失去父母ge愛同埋同時間失去雙親,你認為我唔會變成咁咩?(惡)
Chan:你…老豆…死左…
兒:係呀!你好心涼la!係你搞到我冇左老豆嫁!八婆(惡)
婷:你點可以咁樣同你呀媽講野嫁!
兒:點解唔得呀?(兒呢個時侯好雲)
賢:你點呀,兒(温柔!)(扶住兒)
兒:冇事呀!(好雲咁講)

過左一陣,兒雲左~

賢:兒…兒…兒…(抱起兒)
Chan:你要去邊呀?
賢:關你叉事呀?
Chan:佢係我個女黎嫁!!
賢:佢都冇當你係佢呀媽(講完走左)
婷:佢梗係去醫療室la!!
Chan:係喎(諗左一陣)
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[[i] 本帖最後由 sammi12 於 2008-9-6 06:16 PM 編輯 [/i]]

哇..跟住呢跟住呢..!?

我呢排唔係好想打字呀...
遲d補返

ch.6

[size=3][color=deepskyblue][b]醫療室~
賢抱住兒闖入醫療室~

姑娘:咩事呀?
賢:佢雲左呀!
姑娘:抱佢入黎(賢即刻入去)
姑娘:放底佢係張床到,然後出去等等,我去叫校e
賢: ok

過左一陣,校e Dr.Ma到左~

賢: Dr.Ma你一定要救返我女友呀!
Ma:冇問題,比5分鐘我!
賢:好呀..唔該Dr.Ma

過左一陣,miz chan到左~

賢:你黎呢到做咩呀?返去上堂la!
Chan:我黎睇我個女都要問過你咩!?
Ma:咁你都要問下你個女想唔想見你先得嫁?
賢: Dr.Ma,兒點呀?
姑娘:佢已經醒返la!你可以入去睇佢la
Chan,賢:唔該哂!

跟住賢入去,miz chan跟住佢後面~
賢:你跟住黎做咩?
Chan:我黎睇下我個女呀!要問過你咩!
賢: (繼續行,冇理到miz chan)

賢終於入左去la! miz chan都入埋去~

賢:兒…兒…(攬住兒)你有冇事呀?
兒:我…冇事呀!
賢:比你嚇死la!
兒:傻豬黎既
賢:見你冇事就好la!返課室la!
兒:好呀!

兒同賢走果時見到miz chan~

兒:你黎做嘜lun野呀?八婆(惡)
賢:走la!BB,唔好理佢la
Chan:唔好走住la!我想同你傾下
兒:哦!一齊la!BB留底
賢:哦,得唔得呀!miz chan
Chan:得!咩唔得呀
兒:咁你講la!快d!我地要上堂嫁!
Chan: okok,我只係想你原諒我姐
賢:都對左miz chan咁耐la!佢都唔係好衰姐!
兒:你係咪想分手呀??叫左唔好提佢la(嬲)(講完走左)
賢:兒…兒…(捉住兒隻手)
兒: (fing開賢隻手)(走左)
賢: (跑)(追住兒)(攬住兒)
兒:放手呀!!(惡)
賢:做咩姐你!唔好咁la!!對唔住呀(溫柔)
兒:sorry呀!(攬住賢,攬得好實)
賢:傻瓜黎既
兒:頭先話同你分手,同你講下笑咋!你唔好嬲呀?
賢:傻la.,點會嬲你姐!
兒:又話返課室!又企係度!
賢:咁行la!(賢拖住兒一齊行返課室)

6A課室~
賢,兒:我地返黎la
娟:兒,你冇事嘛?
兒:冇事la,多謝你ge關心!
賢:返位lo!
娟:你下次要小心d呀!!
兒:知道la,長氣


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[[i] 本帖最後由 sammi12 於 2008-9-6 06:16 PM 編輯 [/i]]

0k的說""
快d p0呀!!

好睇呀!!!
快快poz la~~

sup

ch.7

[size=3][color=royalblue][b]操場~
終於小息la~

賢:bb!
兒:係!黎la!等等la!
賢: (行左過兒到)做咩姐?
兒:令轉面先la
賢:做咩呀?咁秘密做咩姐?
兒:等等先la
賢:好好好...

過左一陣~

賢:得未?
兒:就得!等多一陣
賢: ok
兒:得la得la
賢: (轉身)做咩咁秘密呀?
兒:生日快樂(拎住份禮物)送比你
賢:多謝你呀!仲以為你唔記得添(攬住兒)
兒:傻瓜,你係我男朋友黎嫁,我點會唔記得你幾時生日喎
賢:咁又係

兒係呢個時候見到miz chan~

兒:我地走la,返課室la
賢:好呀!!
兒,賢: (菊弓)
chan:企係度
兒:miz chan,打左鐘la,我地要返課室la(串)
chan:係咩(扮唔知,其實係知嫁)
兒:都話你耳仔有問題嫁la,miz chan,你去驗下耳la
賢:咪係
兒:我地要上堂la,走先,88
賢:88,miz chan
chan:你地兩個,小息黎搵我!

兒同賢扮聽唔到,走左~
結果佢地眞係冇去搵miz chan~


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[[i] 本帖最後由 sammi12 於 2008-9-6 06:17 PM 編輯 [/i]]

sup``

大家...人物介紹果度改左d野
去睇下la

好似太多人物la~
我都唔記得晒~

有D角色會好遲先出場
如果係唔記得ge話
就搵張紙抄低佢la